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The Island

Screenplay

A Screenplay based on the Novel by the same title
by James Freeman

WGAE Registration Number 126066-00

EXT. DUCK BLIND ON ECKLES LAKE - PRE DAWN

Screen opens to the black waters of a lake and the flush of a hundred mallard ducks as they rise in panic, from what is obscured to the viewer. A johnboat (an 18' flat bottomed camouflaged boat from which ducks are shot) is poled slowly into the scene. Still almost dark, a lone old man at the stern seen only in silhouette pushes the boat to a huge double duck blind the size of a squat two car garage rising on driven poles from the lakebed. The blind is covered to the water line with willow branches and cornstalks. He pauses, straightens, reaches to the first of two five gallon cans, unscrews the cap and pours the liquid on the water, where it floats under the blind. A second can is opened and poured.

He pushes the boat gently back from the kerosene covered water and crouches. CLOSE UP of gnarled hands striking a wooden match. On the right wrist a silver and turquoise bracelet of unusual design with the silver initials GH is seen. The match is flipped out and into the water.

A roaring conflagration occurs, the old man in the boat caught sharply in silhouette.

TITLE AND CREDITS COME UP

CUT TO

EXT. ECKLES LAKE - MID DAY

Broad shot of Eckles Lake, the burned duck blind and a johnboat floating in a scurf of ashes, two men wearing hip boots, cuffed at the knee like fireman's boots, swing their legs in idle circles over the gunwale.

CAMERA CLOSES ON

HANK EDSON

Shit! Two weeks work, the season ten days away and that sonofabitch burns me out.

DWIGHT

Gart?

HANK EDSON

You better believe Gart. Gart Haggard's behind every burning, breakin' in, low life bit of mischief ever done on this island.

DWIGHT

And?

HANK EDSON

And now I build her again. And if she burns again, I'll kill that sonofabitch.

DWIGHT

You don't mean that.

HANK EDSON

No, I don't mean that, but I'll find that sonofabitch on a bar stool in the Brick Tavern or here on my land where he's got no right to be and beat him two thirds of the way to death.

DWIGHT

C'mon Hank, he must be seventy years old. Maybe more.

HANK EDSON

You're right old buddy, that ain't gonna do. But something's gonna give. That old bastard's been breakin' and burnin' the twenty years I've owned this place.

DWIGHT

The law . . .

HANK EDSON

The law!

(laughs)

The law don't mean shit. He's local, been local, growed up local like his grandaddy. The law don't work against local.

DWIGHT

You'll never get this blind back up before the season.

HANK EDSON

Hell I won't. Get her up if I have to work nights to do it.

CUT TO

EXT. PARKING LOT IN SMALL LOCAL TOWN - NIGHT

Shot from across the two lane road to a shabby building covered in tarpaper brick, with a Pabst Blue Ribbon sign, BRICK TAVERN. Camera follows POV across road, between cars and into building.

CUT TO

INT.TAVERN - NIGHT

A beatup pool table is seen to the left, several high school kids playing, several more watch. The balance of the interior is given to a long wood bar, mismatched stools, typical mirrored backbar lined with bottles a line of dusty stuffed ducks suspended on wires the length of the bar. Several men sit at the bar, farmer types nursing beers. A burly old man in camouflage sits at the far end, his face not seen. He bangs down an empty glass and in CLOSE UP a turquoise and silver bracelet is seen as he shoves the glass toward the barmaid. The crash of breaking pool balls coincides with the CLOSE UP.

GART HAGGARD

Guess that'll do her, Charla.

BARMAID-CHARLA

See ya, Gart.

The old man shoves back and walks out of the shot. A high school boy, tall and gawky, but of athletic build slides into the seat as the barmaid wipes the bar.

KID IN SALOON

He don't change much, does he Charla?

BARMAID-CHARLA

Who, Gart? Nah, he's just here and always has been, like this wreck of a tavern. He don't look a damn bit different than when I came to town twenty years ago.

(chuckles, retrieves her cigarette from the ashtray and taps off a long ash)

I just get older and more beat up and this joint gets older and more beat up and old Gart, he stays the same. Sometimes I wonder if he's human.

KID IN SALOON

Bought me a beer last week, just like he was my grandaddy or something, sat here and jabbered away. Tonight he don't know who I am, might be someone who just fell in off the highway. Can I bum a smoke, Charla?

BARMAID-CHARLA

The coach catch you in here Dicky, pounding down Blue Ribbons and smoking my cigarettes, he'll set your sorry ass on the bench a week.

(reaches for the pack under the bar, shakes out a cigarette and offers it)

KID IN SALOON

What's he like, Charla? Eighteen years I been growin' up in this godforsaken town and I still can't figure the old man out, what makes him tick. Seems he'll work all day in the sun, helping some fella fix up an' old beater truck and the next week damn near kill him over something don't mean shit. One time buy me a beer, next time don't even know me.

BARMAID-CHARLA

That's just his way, Dicky. Always been an' always will be. Gart don't like anyone to know him too well.

KID IN SALOON

Shit, Charla. That's what everybody says, it's just his way.

(takes a long drag on the cigarette, glances at the pool table)

Is it true, that story they tell about Gart and the Game Warden?

BARMAID-CHARLA

Yeah, it's true. You woulda been still in diapers back then. New fella from the state Department of Conservation took over here in Mason County and I guess he figured it was his ticket up the line to something bigger in Springfield. Gonna throw his weight around and make a name for himself. Not that old a guy, all spit and polish, wore one of them Smokey Bear hats dead level on his head.

(takes a drag, glances at the Blue Ribbon clock over the bar)

FADE TO

Sepia silent film of the scene as Charla unfolds the story in voice-over.

BARMAID-CHARLA (VO)

Folks weren't all that crazy about him, don't like a fella takes his wardening all that serious, particularly with the locals and particularly on their own land. But there was no gettin' around this guy, he'd as soon bust a farmer killing a deer out of season as he would some overshooter from Chicago. Didn't matter if the farmer had kids and a bad year with the crops, just mattered that it was the law. Folks will put up with that shit during the season, but somehow it don't seem right to have the law in the woods off season. Anyway he knew about Gart and some of the other old boys who still market hunted now and then. Hell, everyone knew about Gart, even in Springfield, maybe especially in Springfield. This fella thought he'd build a name and put a stop to all that.

CUT TO

KID IN SALOON

How 'bout another Blue, Charla?

BARMAID-CHARLA

You got money, Dicky?

KID IN SALOON

Aw c'mon, Charla. I only got these two quarters tonight an' I may just play some pool. I'll pay you Tuesday.

(Charla sighs, pops the cap on a beer)

This Screenplay is available in the complete version by request.

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